User:Loraaljbour/Data Universalism/Kaitlinabeele Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Loraaljbour


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Loraaljbour/Data Universalism
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article is very well written and structured. Each section flows very well into the next, and the spelling and grammar appear flawless. The author uses a fair number of resources to meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements. It is possible that they could expand their use of citations for a stronger list of references, though not inherently necessary.

I appreciate the link to related articles at the bottom. I wonder if there is any opportunity within the text of the article to link out to additional wikipedia pages for increased discoverability.

Overall, I think you have a strong article, that looks very ready for publishing. You've addressed the topic and critiques of data universalism very effectively. The only other consideration might be if you will include any graphics with your article.

Well done!