User:Loraaljbour/Data Universalism/Mariam Shadad Peer Review

Hello! Awesome job on the article, its concise and well formulated.

Suggestions, in the first paragraph, you cite a specific page outwardly, instead of annotatively in the citation itself. Your sources are great, they all work (links wise). I'd possibly suggest looking at a few more to garner different perspectives on the subject.

In your section on de-westernization you reference Milan and Treré. You should add the article and/or book or work that you are referring to. This helps provide clarification for the reader whilst establishing your understanding of the subject. Your following section on the global south is great, it produces a secondary contrast to the topic of de-westernization.

Overall, it's a great article! I think you can build upon it a bit more; look at technological nationalism and politics, these topic may relate to your work.

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