User:Loralice/Soil carbon/NadiaEfon Peer Review

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Loralice
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Evaluate the drafted changes
This seems like a interesting topic how ever it seems too broad. Would recommend assessing soil carbon storage in a particular area for instance in marshes, or desert soils. just some thing more particular.

I would also suggest that you make the lead section more catchy. That is what make your reader more interested in the subject by bringing up important and relevant facts about the topic. I think you could expand more on the specific way antropogenic factor affect soil carbon. Maybe adding content like how nutrient runoff from agricultural soils, surounding urban and industrial settlements influence soil carbon.

The content added is relevant to the topic how ever it is lacking some information like sources of soil carbon, processes involved in soil carbon storage. However, like that you included the proportion of carbon storage on earth, how climate change impact soil and the benefits of carbon to soil health.

My other recomendation is to work on the organization of the article as the sections are a bit confusing to read or relate to the prevouse paragraphs. This will make it easier for readers to engage in your topic.