User:Loralice/Soil carbon/Pandas forest Peer Review

General info
Loralice
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Loralice/Soil_carbon_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Soil carbon

Evaluation of drafted changes
First, with your edits in the lead, I think it is perhaps a little too content heavy right away. I would let the original sentence about soil carbon's role as a carbon sink in the orginal wiki article come first. Then feel free to add your content. I would also remove the last sentence of the first paragraph in the lead, as it is somewhat redundant with the info your have added now.

Next, for the edits in the Global Carbon Cycle section, I thought this was a very well made starting paragraph for a section that was really lacking one before. Perhaps try to find some sources that estimate the anthropogenic impacts on soil carbon if you can. Otherwise, I like what you have here!