User:LorenaPS/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Wallace Line - Wikipedia
 * Article Evaluation:
 * The article could be improved, as in general the way it is written is not very clear in the way it connects facts and citations. It could also be better organized. The second paragraph in introduction, where some examples are given, does not seem to fit in the introduction very well, although the first paragraph is really good. Maybe move it after historical context and biogeography, in another paragraph with some more information about examples of the effect of the line on different species.
 * The article could be improved, as in general the way it is written is not very clear in the way it connects facts and citations. It could also be better organized. The second paragraph in introduction, where some examples are given, does not seem to fit in the introduction very well, although the first paragraph is really good. Maybe move it after historical context and biogeography, in another paragraph with some more information about examples of the effect of the line on different species.

Option 2

 * Pollination network - Wikipedia
 * Article Evaluation:
 * The article is well written and use good references. I think it would be improved by adding some images to refer to the several studies it mentions. Also, would be interest to explain in the article how pollination network differs from an interaction web. In addition, the last paragraph could better explain how the idea of a network is affected by species loss.
 * The article is well written and use good references. I think it would be improved by adding some images to refer to the several studies it mentions. Also, would be interest to explain in the article how pollination network differs from an interaction web. In addition, the last paragraph could better explain how the idea of a network is affected by species loss.

Option 3

 * Naturalisation (biology) - Wikipedia
 * Article Evaluation:
 * The article is not well written, and the division of topics is confusing. The very first sentence (and the introductory paragraph in general) could be better worded to provide a first, short overview of the topic. The following paragraphs, which are examples, could come after a paragraph giving some background and concepts that apply for characterizing naturalisation. The last paragraph about consequences of immigrant non-native species could offer more examples, since all of the ones cited are from Europe.
 * Option 4
 * Sexual selection - Wikipedia
 * Article Evaluation:
 * The article in general is well written and has a good neutral tone with a good number of references for examples. However, it could be better organized so that the reader does not get lost along the lines easily and the article becomes more cohesive.
 * Article Evaluation:
 * The article in general is well written and has a good neutral tone with a good number of references for examples. However, it could be better organized so that the reader does not get lost along the lines easily and the article becomes more cohesive.
 * The article in general is well written and has a good neutral tone with a good number of references for examples. However, it could be better organized so that the reader does not get lost along the lines easily and the article becomes more cohesive.

Option 5

 * Radioecology - Wikipedia
 * Article Evaluation:
 * The article is relevant to its topic, well written and is concise with good reference to other relevant citations. I feel it could be improved by describing a bit about how the process of measuring radionuclides is done and what are those radionuclides. Perhaps an example of a study would be a good idea to enrich the article.
 * The article is relevant to its topic, well written and is concise with good reference to other relevant citations. I feel it could be improved by describing a bit about how the process of measuring radionuclides is done and what are those radionuclides. Perhaps an example of a study would be a good idea to enrich the article.