User:Lorrriana/Poisoning/Kimberly.N1 Peer Review

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reviewing lorrriana
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Poisoning - Wikipedia
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lead is concise and easy to follow you did well to introduce you topic, good content like what you added about the different between acute toxicity and chronic toxicity. good tone through the article. all sources you added worked and I was able to find the articles you referenced. really well organized liked that you put in sub headings to organize your ideas. Maybe add a picture to show the different levels of exposure. Next time you are working in your sandbox you should to bold your own work so that the reader can tell what is you work and what was already there. Over all very good article.