User:Lou-Andrea Callewaert/Rhonda Dicksion/ImGemstone Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lou-Andrea Callewaert's article on Rhonda Dicksion


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Lou-Andrea_Callewaert/Rhonda_Dicksion&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template&veaction=edit&redirect=no


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * This is a new article still in the drafting stage.

Grammar
There are a couple proper nouns, which could be linked to other Wikipedia articles, like Naiad Press and Edmonds Art Festival. A few of her works listed might need italicization or quotes.

Structure
It will need a more focused lead section. The paragraph included so far in the position, which might be the lead section, reads more as an introduction to her biography listed below it. When later making progress on the article, it will need brief mentions about each of the topics introduced in the rest of the article; for now, the awards section could be mentioned. It might be beneficial to include a detailed section of her most notable works like The Lesbian Survival Manual. You might consider providing images as reference to her work or the artist.

New Article Overall Readability
The artist is notable considering the many works, her past popularity, and achievements. The references have a good mix of primary and secondary sources. Over all, the article so far is well written and informative. It explains perceptions of her work by people without reading as biased.