User:LoveTheExperience/Habitat destruction/ShanPitt Peer Review

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Habitat Destruction by LoveTheExperience


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Habitat destruction


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Habitat destruction

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall I really like this article and how well it is put together. The topic of habitat destruction is widely addressed through the many facets of which it habitat destruction stems from. The information provided in the article is well throughout, well written and is organized well making it easy for the reading to flow through the article. There is no bias and has neutral content. I think the use of more media like photos and graphs would be beneficial for this topic due to it being so broad, media may help with the visual aspect for readers. A few areas of content that could be researched more in depth are natural causes, global warming and the references. Although there is a good amount of references used most of them are outdated, specifically meaning dated from 2005 and later. By incorporating references that draw upon more recent findings and research will help elevate this article. Overall, I think this article is great and with fine tuning could be that much better.