User:Lovebird.butterfly.turtle/Wildlife Conservation Society/AA07232021 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

lovebird.butterfly.turtle


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lovebird.butterfly.turtle/Wildlife_Conservation_Society?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Wildlife Conservation Society

Evaluate the drafted changes
Guiding questions:


 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?
 * Yes
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?
 * No
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?
 * Yes
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?
 * A little bit overly detailed
 * Last sentence of 2nd paragraph could be added to the sentence before it

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic?
 * Yes
 * Is the content added up-to-date?
 * Yes
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?
 * No
 * Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics?
 * This topic is not underrepresented

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral?
 * Yes
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
 * No
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?
 * No