User:Lowy26/The Effect of Lockdown on Air Quality during COVID-19 Pandemic/Jenkint6 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lowy26


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lowy26/The_Effect_of_Lockdown_on_Air_Quality_during_COVID-19_Pandemic?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * n/a

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Overall, your work is well formatted but needs more references to meet the notability standards of Wikipedia. You also need to directly link information within your article tot he reference. I would also suggest creating a strong lead since it is a new article. There are a couple grammar mistakes, so I would go back through and read through your writing to fix the grammar mistakes. While you are off to a good start I would try to add more information to extend the information within the article. Make sure you are using a neutral tone to the topic as Wikipedia requires it. I would also suggest adding some images to help with the visual aspect of the article.