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Tutorial 1 Activity - From Scratch - Chosen Article [Association Football]
If I had created this article first I would have expanded the history section of the article. Currently the history section, for the world's most popular sporting game, is extremely brief and does not include the recent history of the game. Therefore, had I been the initial creator of this article, I would have included a comprehensive history of the game, that includes changes in the rules of the game and how the styles of play have evolved differently across the world. If I was the second reader of this article, I would have fleshed out the rules of the game, as these were present but very unclear in the initial publication of the article. Future substantial edits added a great amount of information regarding Association Football, however if I was in the position of the initial publisher or the second editor, I would have done the aforementioned things differently.

Tutorial 4 Activity - Wikipedia Page Updating
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Demographics_of_Toronto Minor grammatical errors, resolved.