User:Lpsherman1219/Cyberbullying/Smoove42 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lpsherman1219


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lpsherman1219/Cyberbullying?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article is informative and allows the reader to grasp a gist of what cyberbullying is, however I try to review it from a different perspective as if a random person knew nothing about it. I believe a good addition to the article would be to explain in depth what cyberbullying is and why many perform this action. You have scratched a surface of the topic, but mainly lacks clarity to newcomers being introduced to the subject for the first time. There were many types of cyberbullying listed but the foundational definition of cyberbullying was never explained, so listing different types makes it difficult for people to understand each form's variety and severity.

I love that the sources and Information is current and reflected by the past few years, it shows the impact that Covid had on this subject and why it is so easy to perform the actions they do. All links worked perfectly and their were no issues going to the websites. The subject did shift rapidly throughout the article which could be a bit confusing for some, but I believe adding a foundation of information that clarifies "what is cyber bullying" and then proceeds to branch off into similar topics will enhance the overall article heavily. I am vastly intrigued