User:Lr775/Controversies about psychiatry/Ashleyrensted Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lr775


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lr775/Controversies_about_psychiatry?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Controversies about psychiatry

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi!

I think you all did a really fantastic job with this article! My comments are in bullets below:

- Following the "guiding questions" for the peer review, one of them asks about whether or not their is a brief overview of the article's major sections, which I think could be added (I didn't rea;ize this either and I'll need to add this to my article too)

- The lead is overall very concise but informative - excellent!

- I think the first sentence in the "History of racism" section ("The history of racism in psychiatry dates back to the days of slavery and segregation in the United States.") could use a citation.

- The first sentence in the second section ("With time, racial segregation within hospitals became interspersed with entirely separate hospitals for white and Black patients, each with differential treatment and quality of care") could also use a citation

- The third paragraph mentions "experts" without stating who these people are

Overall, y'all did a great job adding comprehensive, unbiased content to this section and all my edits ar every minor. Nice work!