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Marshmellow articles material is relevant, it provides his accomplishments over the years to present day, and how he began getting known. No information is out of date, it presents the exact year when he performed at a concert, festival,etc. Some information that could be added is recent entertainments around the world that he has held. The article is neutral because the article does not say anything disagreeable or unpleasant about the artist. As I read the article, did not see any biased arguments. It simply describes facts of his achievements, performances, early career, etc. Underrepresented information that needs to be elaborated was his early career, it focused more on who he is now, than who he was before. The citations and links do make it easy for you to find addition relevant information of Marshmello. There are multiple sources that can lead you to explore in depth a particular event. There can be articles that are used as references that may be biased toward how they feel about Marshmello, more than just facts, but opinions. On the Talk Page, conversations on how to improve the article are being held, there are some people that claim some facts are not accurate, and while some claim some information needs to be added, they need to have reliable sources to back up their claim. This article is part of the WikiProject Electronic Music, where many artist of EDM are discussed. Wikipedia discusses the topic similarity on how we've talked about in class because it is a summary with a neutral point of view, that describes the major parts of the topic.

Bibliography/Notes The Fashion Industry is beginning to promote their styles through Bloggers on social media's. Vogue specified Chiara Ferragni as "blogger of the moment" due to the rises of followers through her Fashion Blog, that became popular.