User:Lrr00006/Monongah Mine Disaster/Aer0033 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Aer0033


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Lrr00006/Monongah Mine Disaster - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Monongah Mine Disaster

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.) After reading the first part, "The Relief Fund", you did a great job explaining everything clearly to the auidence. Great job so far.