User:Lrr00006/Monongah Mine Disaster/Akb0036 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lrr00006


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Lrr00006/Monongah Mine Disaster


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Monongah mining disaster

Evaluate the drafted changes
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Your draft has started out great! It is very neutral and unbiased, I can tell all that you are trying to do is inform me. Your topics also go together well as they are both on the topic of remembrance/ things people did because of this tragedy. I would recommend maybe explaining the committees under relief fund a little more, it was kind of hard to follow who does what and for what reason.

Your sources seem trustworthy and reliable. I think you did good in transferring information from the source to your contribution. Overall, you have a good draft here and I am excited to see how you will finish it!