User:Lrr00006/Monongah Mine Disaster/Scarysnake Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I feel like a lot could be added such as; the cause for the disaster and the preventative measure taken now to prevent such disasters from happening again.