User:Lruschak/Jacopo Bellini/Jimurano Peer Review

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 * Lruschak
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Lead evaluation: Lruschak edit in the lead offers a very precise impression of who Jacopo Bellini is and what he is known for. The lead is concise and informative.
Content

==== Content evaluation: The newly added texts are a good supplement to the existing ones. Editor's decision to include Jacopo Bellini's inspiration and his sketchbooks is appropriate. It connects with the lead, which mentions the importance of Bellini's sketchbooks. Separating "Books of Drawings" into its own section is a good idea as his books provide great insight on Bellini's artistic mastery and his achievement, but they do not belong in the "Biography" section. In this regard, the whole "Biography" section could be further divided into different parts as well. The current format seems like a mixture of every aspect of Jacopo Bellini. ====

Overall impressions
==== Overall evaluation: I look forward to the future version of this article, as the editor will add "more about sketchbooks in following paragraphs, include antiquarianism of his work, mythological/classical/gothic themes". These materials will certainly expand the scope of the existing article. ====