User:Lsherman3/Walking Art/AGuidry57 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lsherman3


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lsherman3/Walking_Art?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * N/A

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead


 * It took me a couple of sentences to start understanding what walking art is - try starting more directly before mentioning that there isn't a single definition, and that the term can encompass multiple practices

Content


 * Seems pretty complete

Tone and Balance


 * Tone is definitely neutral

Sources and References


 * Great sources

Organization


 * The organization you've chosen works really well for me. It seems like a logical order from broadest ideas about walking art to getting into more details that people reading the full article are more likely to want than people looking for an overview and origins. I'm especially pleased with the "Major themes and motifs" section and how it describes not only common motifs in walking art, but specific works and artists. You've been able to strike a great balance between the abstractness of defining and describing an artistic practice and illustrating its usage.

Media


 * I have no idea what you'd be able to find copyright-free

New Articles Stuff


 * I think this is a great addition to Wikipedia! And obviously you've checked the boxes of what is needed for new articles, including lots of links and sources.