User:Lsm1041/Veterinary pathology/Laj1032 Peer Review

General info
Lsm1041
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Lsm1041/Veterinary pathology
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Veterinary pathology:

Evaluate the drafted changes
I have no idea what sections the information you put in your draft is supposed to go to

You cited zero sources for your information, so please incorporate sources

This looks like a bulleted list of thoughts that I can't peer review because I have no idea where any of the information is supposed to go into the article.

I can't tell if the information that is in your sandbox was copied and pasted from the article into your sandbox, or if you added the information from your sandbox into the article

I see that you have sources in your bibliography and you did a good job explaining them in that, just make sure to add them into your sandbox if you are citing information from them

The information you added to your sandbox is relevant information to the topic, but I don't know where in the article you put this information so it is hard for me to comment on the efficacy of these ideas