User:Lsmith44/Evolution of Sex Determination in Invertebrates/AMaizing2021 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Lsmith44)Lauren Smith


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Lsmith44/Evolution of Sex Determination in C. elegans


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * User:Lsmith44/Evolution of Sex Determination in C. elegans

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead has strong information and sources but seems a bit disorientated, could use minor adjustments. Your content is solid and is cohesive, yet the background needs minor adaptations to improve transitions. The language seems neutral and the facts you have added captivate the reader, yet do not distract...well done. The sources you have used look legit and fit the statements made, but I do think you should wiki-link a few more topics discussed throughout the article. Overall, the article is informative, well-structured and complete; however, the first two sections need minor revision. Great article!