User:Lsmoses/Teratology/Madunn99 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lsmoses


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lsmoses/Teratology?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Teratology

Evaluate the drafted changes
A great way to improve on the article would be to expand the impact of teratogens on humans. While there is a link to the congenital disorders page, it could be beneficial to discuss some common/extreme teratogens and their effects. It could also be extremely beneficial to create a heading discussing historical events, such as the use of a teratogen in a common medicine that came to light, in the recognition and study of teratogens. This could greatly enhance the article as it would help explain the historical context for why there is such a focus on the topic in modern times. This could be taken further to explain how specific groups of society. To get away from humans, the discussion of plants is especially interesting but could use further expansion.

The article contains a good amount of modern references, but it could also be beneficial to look into replacing some of them with more modern references that could also contain information one could add to the article.