User:Lsnellin/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Liquid-propellant rocket

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I am passionate about rocketry, and I believe that liquid-propelled rockets are the single most important technology when it comes to space exploration.

Evaluate the article
Lead Section:

The lead section is good overall. I think that the organization is a little weird, but all in all it captures what needs to be said about the topic in a concise manner.

Content:

The biggest shortcoming of the article's content is the lack of information about the advantages of using liquid propellant in a rocket. The article goes in depth describing the issues associated with using liquid propellants, but only briefly mention the positive aspects. Furthermore, when the positive aspects are mentioned, they are simply just stated as properties of the technology. I believe that it is important to highlight why liquid propelled rockets are so attractive when it comes to selecting a type of rocket to use for a space mission.