User:Lthottathil/Non scarring hair loss/Lthottathil Peer Review

Peer review
Everything in the article is relevant to the article topic and the article has a neutral voice. Viewpoints are not over represented but the diagnosis and treatment sections are the bigger sections of the article. Citations all work and are reputable sources including pubmed articles and .org sources.

Lead sections is great, summarizes the main points and highlights all the pertinent information. In the lead section, it is very helpful to compare nonscarrng hair loss and scarring hair loss, differentiating the two, which helps the reader fully understand the concept.

Grammatical error in the following sentence "The most common cause is androgenetic alopecia, also known as male pattern or female pattern hair loss due to the effects of dihydrotestosterone (DHT) on the hair follicles."

The following sentence can be rephrased for an easier read, perhaps break it up into 2 sentences? "Poor diet may lead to tiredness, other side effects of chemotherapy drugs may be seen, infection can cause itching, stress may lead to pulling of hair or falling of hair."

This template of this article helped me to write my own article. Good in-depth description of each test done to diagnose the disorder.

~LThottathil