User:Lucighucig/Economics of language/Cd27053 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) lucighucig


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lucighucig/Economics_of_language?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Economics of language

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Overall, I think it's a pretty good draft, I like that you were able add more sections, as the current article really only has one section. I think it would maybe be helpful if you were able to add more sentences to the new sections though I understand that may be hard to do. You definitely added to the article significantly. The gender gap one and pronouns one are especially interesting and beneficial. I think your additions are all cited well and well sourced, and everything seems factually based. Maybe see if there's anymore links to add as there's only one currently? But overall I think it's pretty good!