User:Lucluc97/Quantum technology/Oriess Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

lucluc97 and jgrintz


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lucluc97/Quantum_technology?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Quantum technology

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The main edits for this article are the section on Quantum simulators, and the addition of a table detailing Quantum Technology research programs.

Lead
The lead was unchanged in this edit, and I still think it accurately captures the scope of Quantum Technology- it didn't need any additional details for the added sections. However, simulators is the one section that is not linked to another wiki page in the introduction to types of tech, and I know that it is linked later on. I would also link in the leading section since this section was added and for mirroring purposes with the other tech.

Content
I think that the added content is relevant to the article, and the table does a good job of covering a variety of countries and their work. Also, because this is a newly emerging field, the content is very up-to-date.

A couple of notes:

There is a link to the the Quantum Technology Flagship, which is highlighted in red, because it says that this page does not exist. I would remove the link for find the page you were looking for.

I'm also wondering if you think the Education programs you listed in the table are enough research-oriented to include or if they are more so just teaching the principles. I'm not necessarily saying to remove if you think they're important, just thought you could take a second look since the title of the table is specifically about research.

Also, I would go back through your Type of Quantum Technology Research column to make what field you refer to specific. Sometimes you write "Quantum computing" other times just "Computing" as an example- there are also typos and words are missing spaces between them. Just a quick review would be good!

Tone and Balance
I think this is very well balanced and informational on the topic.

Organization
This was really a well organized table- gave all the information needed without going too in depth. Great job.

Images/ Media
Nothing added so no notes

Overall Impressions
I think these were some really great additions and help to provide some good jumping off points for people looking into the field of quantum technology. I also think the added synopsis on quantum simulators and linking that was an important addition.