User:LucyLauck/Aegyo/Lsolares Peer Review

Overall content seems to be well informed and edited to remain relevant to the chosen topic. Content is neutral and easy enough to understand. I hadn't any information on the subject beforehand so I'm not sure of the accuracy but trust in the ability of my groupmate and believe that any added information is correct. I can say that the content has added a new subject to my knowledge and I now know more.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

LucyLauck


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:LucyLauck/Aegyo?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Aegyo

Evaluate the drafted changes
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