User:Lucyc2/School Psychology/JasmineG17 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lucyc2


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * School psychology - Wikipedia
 * School psychology - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
The intervention section you added to help the information be more concise in my opinion. The article didn't dive too deep into intervention in schools, but you added some much-needed information to make that part stronger. I noticed the part you were hesitant about cutting out and I think there are some parts that you can cut, and some should stay. I feel the second paragraph should be kept but maybe it can be touched up a bit. For example, it states that there are some concerns with implementing these services, but it doesn't say exactly what the concerns are. You could possibly expand on those concerns to make that part a little more understanding for readers. From the main article in the part titled racial disproportionality in special education someone mention it needed to be expanded on. I found a link for some more up-to-date information about that topic. The information added so far is a good start and I'm excited to see what else you add to the article.