User:Lucysteven3/Nghana Lewis/Amulumudi Peer Review

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Lucysteven3
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Lead: I think your lead section is a good start, I am only concerned about your lack of citations in the last two sentences. Hopefully as you find more information you will be able to add to the lead section to include a brief summary of the highlights of her career. You do a great job with pictures throughout and if you can I would add an info box.

In the second sentence, I don't think you need a comma after judge.

Content: I really like the current structure of the rest of your article, especially the career section which is extremely well organized. For the early life and education section, is there any way you can add more information about her early childhood and high school experience? I think understanding why Lewis was interested in law in the first place is an important part of understanding her path to the bench. For the career section, I think you should include any noteable cases she worked on if you have access to that information.

Tone/Balance: I found your article to be very unbiased and your tone consistent throughout.

References: All your references look good!