User:Lucywalker4/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title:
 * Macrobiology
 * Article Evaluation:
 * The article has little information about any aspect of macrobiology. It is neutral and contains citations for every claim, but considering it only contains about three sentences, it could use a lot of improvement. I propose adding more sub- categories to fully explain the topic.
 * Sources:
 * https://academic.oup.com/bioscience/article-abstract/31/1/69/228779 (Anaerobic macrobiology)
 * https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC2591978/ (Clinical macrobiology)
 * I was not able to find many sources relevant to the general topic of 'macrobiology,' most were applied knowledge that would not be appropriate for the article.
 * https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC2591978/ (Clinical macrobiology)
 * I was not able to find many sources relevant to the general topic of 'macrobiology,' most were applied knowledge that would not be appropriate for the article.

Option 2

 * Article title:
 * Marine geology
 * Article Evaluation:
 * The article seems unfinished but has a good start. It remains neutral and has references, but the citations are not embedded in the writing. Its overview briefly goes over aspects of marine geology, but includes no subsections elaborating on each. Relevant images are incorporated, contributing to the understanding of information presented.
 * Sources:
 * https://link.springer.com/content/pdf/10.1007/s12237-012-9557-0.pdf (Littoral sediment)
 * https://pubs.geoscienceworld.org/gsa/gsabulletin/article-abstract/80/10/1889/6402/The-Structure-and-Tectonic-History-of-the-Eastern?redirectedFrom=fulltext (Oceanic trench)
 * https://agupubs.onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/full/10.1029/2006gl027522 (subduction zone)
 * https://pubs.geoscienceworld.org/gsa/gsabulletin/article-abstract/80/10/1889/6402/The-Structure-and-Tectonic-History-of-the-Eastern?redirectedFrom=fulltext (Oceanic trench)
 * https://agupubs.onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/full/10.1029/2006gl027522 (subduction zone)

Option 3

 * Article title:
 * Artificial seawater
 * Article Evaluation:
 * Like the previous article, this one seems a bit unfinished. It contains a good neutral intro, but subsections that could use more detail. The article does have good references and in text citations, but again a lot of information should be added. An informative table is also included, showing the components of artificial seawater.
 * Sources:
 * https://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/full/10.1046/j.1529-8817.2001.01052.x?casa_token=rMBHAp7YaA0AAAAA%3A9YOex0ob3f285wIGLCfMI4c5Kq4q41tSK0LfxbRg_I_U7tJBV6RvENuBi2rrtQOrqOtym2IYWOCEwphW (Evolution of artificial seawater)
 * https://pubs.acs.org/doi/abs/10.1021/es200127p?casa_token=RgKIBtGWJB0AAAAA:dyfpGmOHsp1wtTyRewdqMjpB-6Qtmj90vKoXPnv5IL0cmF4InIzc-21IdeTFfBt_52yqOJdlOL4SWD2E (Uses of artificial seawater)
 * https://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/full/10.1046/j.1529-8817.2001.01052.x?casa_token=rMBHAp7YaA0AAAAA%3A9YOex0ob3f285wIGLCfMI4c5Kq4q41tSK0LfxbRg_I_U7tJBV6RvENuBi2rrtQOrqOtym2IYWOCEwphW (Evolution of artificial seawater)
 * https://pubs.acs.org/doi/abs/10.1021/es200127p?casa_token=RgKIBtGWJB0AAAAA:dyfpGmOHsp1wtTyRewdqMjpB-6Qtmj90vKoXPnv5IL0cmF4InIzc-21IdeTFfBt_52yqOJdlOL4SWD2E (Uses of artificial seawater)

Option 4

 * Article title:
 * Aquatic respiration
 * Article Evaluation:
 * The article contains a decent amount of information, but is generally unfocused. Good references are used, but the article is not fully cited and some facts are not explained properly.
 * Sources:
 * It is difficult to find sources that would help improve this article because it already includes good ones that contribute. Edits on the page would to suggest a more focused aspect of aquatic respiration, and stick with the sources already posted, then go from there if more information is needed.
 * Sources:
 * It is difficult to find sources that would help improve this article because it already includes good ones that contribute. Edits on the page would to suggest a more focused aspect of aquatic respiration, and stick with the sources already posted, then go from there if more information is needed.

Option 5

 * Article title:
 * Tide pool
 * Article Evaluation:
 * The general outline is good for this article; it contains a concise intro and relatively detailed subsections. However, the subsection 'marine life' could do with more information as it only discusses two types of marine life present in tide pools. References and citations look good and the tone remains neutral throughout.
 * Sources:
 * https://www.int-res.com/articles/meps/98/m098p187.pdf (community structure of tide pools)
 * https://books.google.com/books?hl=en&lr=&id=uufQnE7MzMkC&oi=fnd&pg=PR15&dq=what+organisms+live+in+tide+pools&ots=wIzsqF0vFc&sig=RwhtIa4I1_dbN7sQEcs7l6_YeNk#v=onepage&q=what%20organisms%20live%20in%20tide%20pools&f=false (encyclopedia)
 * https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/0022098185901637 (tide pool fish)
 * https://books.google.com/books?hl=en&lr=&id=uufQnE7MzMkC&oi=fnd&pg=PR15&dq=what+organisms+live+in+tide+pools&ots=wIzsqF0vFc&sig=RwhtIa4I1_dbN7sQEcs7l6_YeNk#v=onepage&q=what%20organisms%20live%20in%20tide%20pools&f=false (encyclopedia)
 * https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/0022098185901637 (tide pool fish)