User:Luisa9544/Michael Spencer (engineer)/Devin Stangle Peer Review

General info
Luisa9544, Michael248, Sethm2036
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Luisa9544/Michael Spencer (engineer)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
There are no picture yet added but the tone of the paper is neutral and the use of wiki links were limited to the start but were not added through the rest of the article. I also like how they separated the articles and the sections headers before the paragraphs were short but told the person what they were reading about. I like how they separated work and research so they can put a greater focus into each instead of just saying his research was a part of their work. The 4 links I believe were the ones they were provided and I do not think they added their own yet.