User:Luisa9544/Michael Spencer (engineer)/JoeyFungus Peer Review

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Luisa9544, Sethm2036, Michael248
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Lead

I thought this section was very well put together. It does a good job of giving a general overview of him and his families life.

Education

I believe with Bachelor's of Science degrees you have to put the apostrophe however not for a master if it is a science degree.

Work

The work section was very thorough and well put together. It goes through his career history with him working at Bell Laboratories to becoming the dean of Clarence M. Mitchell Jr. School of Engineering at Morgan State University.

Research

I think this section is very good as it is very simple yet also very descriptive. This section was my favorite part to read.

Social Responsibility

This part is a little confusing to me because I do not understand the reason for the section header being social responsibility but it was well written and does show off some of the work he has done to inspire the public.

The links all worked so all the references checked out although I did want to point one thing out and that was one of the references looked a little messed up towards the end saying something like last=has generic name but I do not think that was an issue on your part.

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