User:Luisr9999/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Chamber music

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
This article was assigned by my professor.

Evaluate the article
At first sight, the article seems to have a good amount of information. Upon closer inspection, there are some sentences that are a bit vague and could be rewritten to describe the topic better. For example, in the lead there is a sentence about musicians requiring "special skills" to perform chamber music as opposed to symphonic works. As a musician I have an idea of what these "special skills" might be referring to, but to a general audience this sentence is vague and could be more specific.

Under the early beginnings tab, the last sentence seems out of place and could be rewritten to include specific information. The sentence "Haydn was commissioned to write a few of these," is what I am referring to.

The first sentence under the "Franz Schubert History," is vague an up for interpretation. What exactly is meant by "Beethoven went off in his own direction?" This sentence is up for interpretation and should be rewritten to include more specific information. The overall content under Schubert is simply okay. It can definitely be improved by adding more information on the chamber music of Schubert. This will require some research but it is manageable.