User:Luiza Coulaud/Feminism in Brazil/RebLAHIS Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Luiza Coulaud


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Luiza%20Coulaud/Feminism_in_Brazil?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Feminism in Brazil

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Hi Luiza,

By viewing your draft, seeing you are editing and inputing content, such as the historic background information into the page Feminism in Brazil which originally existed. The content of that are neutral, as you are writing the background/ intro. The part you are writing is clear, and it doesn't make me feel like your writing is having a basis on any other side. For sources and references, I can see a reference has added, I think you can add more to support your content page, which to make the page and information more solid and stronger to the readers. I saw you have linked those key terms in the passages, appreciated. I am looking forward to see you expanding your content more and sources too, into the page that you are creating.

Best,

Rebecca