User:Luke.sewpersaud/Weekend Update/Abbybh Peer Review

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This looks really good! Adding updates on current and past instances of this is a really good idea! It is really well structured. Maybe add a few more sources from journals!

Thank you very much, I think doing past and present helps narrow things down a bit. I will incorporate this!