User:LukeShort2/2011 stock market crash/Acechen0 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

LukeShort2


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Black Monday (2011)

Evaluate the drafted changes
This draft mainly talks about the stock market crash in 2011 and its impact on the western world. The content of article is connected with the stock market crash and mainly address the solutions after the recession. How do people react after the stock market falls.This article does not relate to any Wikipedia's equality gaps and minorities. The source of this article mainly comes from the news website such as CNN, and New York Times. I think the tone of this article is neutral, which I can not find any words that relate to expression or personal idea. Overall, I think this is a good start, but it still needs some work in terms of the lead section.