User:Lukeryan360/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Lake Wallenpaupack

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
It's an important part of where I grew up, and I believe it's the page that I would be most able to make accurate modifications.

Evaluate the article
Lead:

Very effective; briefly and immediately conveys the size of the lake, its origin, and a comparison to similar locations.

History/content:

Missing some necessary links. Also isn't completely up-to-date. Unbiased and concise.

Organization:

Broken up nicely, but the order of the sections could be more natural; perhaps if the technical and geological information wasn't located in the middle of the sections detailing the lake's history, uses, and ownership. Tone remained consistent, and all parts felt adequately represented.