User:Lulusares/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Phenomenology (psychology)

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
Phenomenology plays a role in most fields of study but is especially pervasive in the study of art history. The disciplines focus on perspective and interpretation helps to inform the study of ekphrasis, simplistically defined as the description of a work of art, specifically in the illumination of the challenge that the nature of individual perspective poses.

Evaluate the article
The introduction section could use some expanding in terms of the subjects use and application as well as an expansion on how the authors and philosophers influenced the study and development of phenomenology. The content is also lacking a little in substance and context. The tone and balance seems pretty even but the experience section, while content-wise it was the most detailed and engaging, could use some rewording for clarity and to eliminate any underlying connotations that may inspire the reader to interpret the article a certain way. There could have been a few more references to the writings and concepts of the authors as opposed to simply the names of the authors. The talk page seems to agree that the introduction section could use some work as well as the structure of the article overall.