User:Luluuu206

Bio
About me I'm newly a student at Everett Community College, In 2019 I had graduated from Cascade High School. I am also a newly part time worker at Bigfoot Java in Edmonds, before that I worked at Sears in Everett until it closed in December of 2019. I am Native American from the Black feet tribe, Cuban, Spanish and Scottish. In my future I plan on pursuing a career in criminal Justice and joining the FBI, or win the lottery and travel for life. My Wikipedia interests I'm new to Wikipedia, I've visited before to research topics for classes in highschool, but this is my first time being involved in editing/creating.



Article Evaluation
Wikipedia is a rabbit hole of wikis that seem endless so finding a topic I could dissect took me longer then it probably should have because I couldn't make up my mind. After thinking it through, I decided I would focus on something I know a little about. I remember seeing my cousins wikipedia page a couple years ago, but I have never really took a close look at it. I visited the, and found three aspects of it worth commenting on: the typo, sources, and contents.

Typos
After reading through Misty's wiki I noticed a typo that is minor but I had noticed it and wanted to point it out. The text says "He went on to say that Misty packed her belonging and left her apartment." and obviously reading belonging should be changed to belongings. With a typo in this particular paragraph explaining how the father had asked for help from the police once Misty went missing can make the reader second guess the article.

Contents
Noticing that the biggest part of the article was the death of Misty Upham, which is not surprising because it was a sad way to go. Although the early life and Career sections seem too small compared to the death portion. There should be more about her as a person/interests and more of what she did in her career elaborated. It seems as this page is more about her death than it is about her.

Summary
In regards to my thoughts overall, I believe that this article is not perfect of course, it has flaws and could be majorly improved. Without evidence it makes the page hard to read as reliable and trustworthy. The page was last edited November 10th of 2019 which wasn't that long ago considering she wasn't a huge actress and had passed six years ago. I think with the proper improvements this page would be great.