User:Lumbarjax/Enterobacterial common antigen/Kemrishae Peer Review

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LEAD

I would remove the yet on the last sentence of the first paragraph, just make it more of a factual statement but the intro is really good!

CONTENT

Are you guys going to do the history portion in a more paragraphical form? Or will you keep it in the bullet point form its in? I don’t think there is anything wrong with the bullet point form at all I just wondered, I Iike the information and I think its well done!

Your topic has a lot of material to sift through to understand but I think you guys presented it in the best way to understand it in a way for people such as myself who have no idea what you are talking about. Good job with that! It looks like a good article I would want to use if I were doing a school project and needed straight forward information.

I do think everything you guys posted was neutral which was good. No opinions or swaying objections.

REFERENCES

Your references seem to be super solid. Well done and well researched I believe. Overall good work on this, I don’t think this topic was easy but you guys did a great job with it.

I think there is room overall for trying to understand and simplify even more of what is being stated but other than that you guys have a great start.