User:Lumbarjax/Enterobacterial common antigen/Maile.mickelsen Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lumbarjax


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Lumbarjax/Enterobacterial_common_antigen&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template&veaction=edit&redirect=no


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
This looks like a great first draft and the data that has been used is neutral and described well. The introduction (lead) does a good job at describing what ECA is, maybe you could include an introduction to the articles contents once you get closer to the final draft. It looks like some headlines have questions that haven't been answered but I'm assuming that your just outlining your draft which is a good idea. You did really well with finding descriptions for the ECA history, keep it up! The format of your article makes it easy to read. The references look like they have some formatting issues, to fix them go over the trainings in the our module. Good job so far!