User:Lumbarjax/Enterobacterial common antigen/Taylorbr97 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lumbarjax


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lumbarjax/Enterobacterial_common_antigen?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lumbarjax/Enterobacterial_common_antigen?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
The introduction paragraph is very informative but can also be a lot for people who may not know much about microbiology. I would suggest expanding on some subjects in layman's terms. For example explain more about Enterobacterales like how it's a gram negative, its shape, where its found, etc. As in introduction it should explain and break down the following paragraphs.

Lots of great information in each section. Obviously right now the framework is still being laid out, try and incorporate the questions into the paragraphs instead of using them as a header.

There is only one place where your references are sited using the wikipedia siting tool, the rest look like they say what article they came from instead of using the footnote tool. Lots of great and applicable references however! Great job!!