User:Lumiious/Architecture of Africa/Cmagada20 Peer Review

-Overall, the content is very organized and easy to read. I thought the transition, in the beginning, was great because it caught my attention. It made me want to read more about the history of rural African Architecture.

-References are used in a very well manner, where it needs to be.

-I really like how the paragraphs flow altogether, even though the topics are different.

-Insert definitions for words people may not know the meaning of. I feel like this would help readers understand the context more and have a better visual of the text.

-Provide images maybe? To help with context.

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