User:Lumiious/Architecture of Africa/Hfarrugia21 Peer Review

Intro

I think this is a great way to introduce your topic. It is very clear, understandable, and is honestly a good hook. I think it might be nice to have some sort of hyperlinks on words that may need more explanation to any other people researching this topic.

Modern Sub-Saharan African Rural Architecture

This section looks good. It is short and sweet! Maybe adding some pictures as a visual representation would be good.

Modern Islamic African Architecture

This is a great section with a lot of good information. I think again, hyperlinking to words that could use a little bit more information and photos would be great!

Overall

You guys have such a great start! I am very interested in the information you are bringing up and am excited to read the finished product! Nice work!