User:Lumiious/Architecture of Africa/PacificBelle19 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ezinash, Aosiernn, Lumiious


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lumiious/Architecture_of_Africa?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Architecture of Africa

Evaluate the drafted changes
I feel like the beginning is a bit biased and I know you are refrencing a resource but I still get that vibe. I think the specific parts of African Architecutre are good since I feel like it important to see how changes in religion and trading and otuside influence affected architecture. Overall really good job!