User:LunaEscobar01/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Women in Colombia

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I don't know if I have to talk about a specific topic, but following what the class is about, I decided to speak about women in my home country, Colombia, and after reading the Wikipedia article about this topic, I noticed a huge lack of information, disorganization, and more.

Evaluate the article
The article doesn't have a strong introductory sentence; it doesn't describe clearly the topic's article. The details of the articles, mainly in the introduction, are very vague and don't have much important or relevant information about women in Colombia. There are some parts that have interesting points about the topic, and the last update was in 2022, but the information in the article is not modern, has no new details, and the history is not very specific. The article is not neutral; it has a certain bias and it has no balance in it. In my evaluation I also found an incredible lack of information on topics that are really important. The main topics are history, educational rights, legal contract rights, suffrage rights, family life, domestic violence, abortion (which is the shortest and not up to date) and armed conflict. Not a single one about feminism, which is a key topic in Colombia, or the importance of indigenous women, which have had a great impact on history, being an important pillar for the country. The sources have a diverse spectrum of authors. Also, all the reference links work properly; they are reliable, but because there is not a lot of modern information, all the references are kind of old. The article is easy to read but lacks information that can be helpful to understand more deeply the topics that are presented in the article. It also needs better organization between paragraphs and topics. They are weak and not clear.

Also, the article does not have a lot of images. It has only two images in the whole article, which are not appealing, do not contribute to the topic, and the caption is vague. This article needs more information on all the topics; it needs to be updated with more modern information and develop certain ideas that are actually strong and interesting. Also, adding more pictures to the article can be a great change by giving more context and appealing to the article.