User:Lunar2004/Abortion in the United States/B.manpas Peer Review

General info
Lunar2004
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Lunar2004/Abortion in the United States
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Abortion in the United States

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead section effectively introduces Ziegler and her work, including her response to the fall of Roe v. Wade and major themes of her research. The content focuses on relevant topics related to abortion rights and access, including her recent Guggenheim Fellowship. The tone remains neutral, presenting Ziegler's work objectively without bias. Sources are comprehensive, diverse, and up-to-date, supporting the claims made in the article. However, you still need to add in text citations. It will be helpful as well if you considered adding links to other Wikipedia pages in concepts you mention. The organization is clear and logical, with well-written content.

Suggestions for Improvement
 * Consider adding a sentence to the Lead mentioning Ziegler's focus on the harms of restricting abortion access.
 * You could expand the section on international abortion issues to highlight how Ziegler's work addresses equity gaps in abortion access globally.
 * For the "medical issues regarding abortion" section, consider mentioning specific examples from Ziegler's work to further illustrate this point.