User:Lunderwoodsfsu/The 5th Wave (film)/Bethstfrancis Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lunderwooodsfsu


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lunderwoodsfsu/The_5th_Wave_%28film%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * The 5th Wave (film)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think you choice some good sections of this article to add to, like the music section. Your add ons are relevant and sourced, however, for using these sources I do not believe you need to use quotation marks at all in a Wikipedia article. Like in your last section, you have a super length quote from the author. You could just summarize the way they felt, just remember to change the words around enough and leave a source on the words or at the end and you're good. You could also edit the Box Office section, the original one could use a bit more detail. But, to wrap up, I liked your contributions and I think the article will be much more put together after, the only main problem I see is with the quotations.