User:LundyLoo/Allostatic load/Mpiard Peer Review

General info
Mpiard
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:LundyLoo/Allostatic load
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Allostatic load

Evaluate the drafted changes
I like the information you added! It is relevant to the topic and not a repetition of information that is already there. I enjoy how you added more to the definition of Allostatic Load and I feel it added much needed information to the article. You seem neutral in your tone and I am not distracted by any of the information you provided. The links all work and the references are all recent. I wonder if you can maybe add a bit more to the implications but I understand that this topic may have limited information.

"Causing factors of allostatic load include the following, continual physiological arousal due to chronic stress, inadequate coping, continuing stress response following the completion of a stressor, and insufficient allostatic response to a stressor."

- for this sentence right here, put a ':' (colon) since you are making a list.

Great Job!