User:Lupineflower/No-till farming/Iadaniel Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lupineflower


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lupineflower/No-till_farming?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * No-till farming

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think you did a great job laying out the policy surrounding no-till farming, and the inclusion of the policy tools is also a really great addition. The content provided is very consistent and neutral, and your sources look very reliable. Something I would add is probably the motivations as to why Representative Davis proposed this bill and probably see if it falls in line with other bills he has proposed, and also maybe find more information or simply describe the Environmental Quality Incentives Program and Conservation Stewardship Program so readers can have a better idea of what these specific programs do and what makes them different from each other. Overall, I really enjoyed reading over your edits, as they are very professional and concise.